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I like it. The middle looks kind of funny, but I can't explain it.

Cool! It would look really good if you added a background. The pink flowing off of it doesn't look quite right, but I think with some tweaking it would work.

Her hands with that green glow is really cool. Her head is way to small, though. Also, she looks part old and part young, which is weird.

I really like this! Her hand behind her head looks sort of like the fingers just disappeared, though. Lighten up the picture, it doesn't need that shading. I'd like to ...

The rhymes were cute, but seriously, there actually has to be something described, at least. I can't tell what you're trying to say.

The imagery was ver good. I think the mixing of sicene and color needs just a little work to flow better. And that "Spyygmomanometer got your tongue?" line really breaks ...

This is a really good description of the beginning of summer. The French translation is great.

What are we if not just, a flicker of light, gone in an instant, a single breath, one of many, a single tick of the secondhand on the clock of ...

I really liked it! Usually if you have a question in apoem it doesn't work, but yours did!

Good idea. I don't see how the part of blue and gold works, though.

I really liked the fire verse. But this character sounds way boring, really uptight.

I really liked this! The description of looking in was good. It went on a little too long, though. Have you tried lyrics? You'd be good.

Very nice concept. The ryme almost seemed unintentional..very good. It needs a significant amount of development, though.

there anything to go off of here?

I really liked it. Very discriptive.